The oral presentation

Now, I'm going to comment a little bit my oral presentation, which I has done the last month. The topic was "Learning verbs" , which is the tittle of my research project. I explained the objectives we proposed, the methodology, some decisions to elaborate my own material, the teaching materials, and finally I said the conclusions I had got with the project.

Now, for do the comment, I'm going to have grounds to the "evaluator's paper", which has the next structure:

Presentation:
I used a powerpoint because for us it is very useful to follow the structure of the presentation. Other thing that I did correct had been the oral presentation's time, because I was speaking about five or six minutes.

Body language & eye contact:
In my opinion, I think that I should look the audience all the time, because it means that the presenter has studied, and he doesn't need read the paper. Other thing, that I improved, is my nervousness, because the people, who are listening to us, note it and for this reason I decided to improve it; this time I had benn only a little bit nervious.

Structure:
For me, the structure of this oral presentation was right, because we did an introduction, the explication of my research project and finally some conclusions and I show to audience my own material, but I didn't use many discourse makers, and it was points against the note.

Content:
I hope that the content of this oral presentation had been entretaining and that we introduce new infotmation to the audience, well, I had done this research project with this goal.

Language:
About the language that I used in this oral presentation was more difficult, because the topic complicate it a lot, because I must to use specific words and connectors to enlared some paragraphs, but I used a lot of fillers like "well", "for example", “okey”...

Pronunciation & Intonation:
For me, it was the worst part of my oral presentation, well like every oral presentation, because it is very poor and I didn't intonated the best I know do; I'm sure I will to improve this part, and the next mark will be better than it. ;)

It's the video: