The oral presentation

Now, I'm going to comment a little bit my oral presentation, which I has done with my friend called Guillem Sanz. The topic was "Youtube fun" and we explained the history of youtube, the videos' commons features that all of you can see to this page, the problems that can produce this webpage...

Now, for do the comment, I'm going to have grounds to the "evaluator's paper", which has the next structure:

Presentation:

Guillem and me used a powerpoint because for us it was be very useful, and all the times, this resource is good to follow the presentation. Other thing that we did correct had been the oral presentation's time, because we were speaking about nine or ten minutes ( approximately, five minutes per person).

Body language & eye contact:

In my opinion, I think that we should look the audience all the time, because it means that the presenter has studied, and he doesn't need read the paper. Other thing, that we should improve, is our nervousness, because the people, who are listening to us, note it.

Structure:

For me, the structure of this oral presentation was right, because we did an introduction, an explication and finally some conclusions, but we didn't use many discourse makers, and it was points against the note.

Content:

I hope that the content of this oral presentation had been entretaining and that we introduce new infotmation to the audience, because it was our goal.

To improve this part, I think we should give more examples and justify our opinions about the topic.

Language:

About the language that we used in the oral presentation was easy, because we decided to not complicate it, because for Guillem and me the english's language it's a little bit difficult, and for this reason we didn't use vocabulary rich and connectors, but we utilized a lot of fillers like "well", "for example",...

Pronunciation & Intonation:

For me, it was the worst part of our oral presentation, because our pronunciation was very poor and we didn't intonated the best that we know do; I supposed that it's for our nervousness, but I'm sure we will to improve this part, and the next mark will be better than it. ;)

It's the video: